Looks cool! Although I think the first version of the frog coming out of the water had a bolder shot because it was focused more on the action of the animals attack, while on the new picture we see a big panorama of the forest and the lake with some action in the middle I'm not sure that it gets the viewers attention as much as the first one you did. Of course it all depends on what you want to express with the picture. sorry for the crab, cool comic either way!!! Will this be published somewhere?
Miklós, I agree with you absolutely. Both versions should have been more exciting and interesting than they turned out but somehow didn't. The Long shot is a bit of an odd choice but I still think that if it got done properly, could work.
Thanks for the criticism, it's very welcome. As for publishing? They'll be enough Gungle gear by the end of the 100 Days to get some sort of album together. Thanks!
The Gungle river stuff is gorgeous Warwick. FWIW I think I might have had an impact shot of the frog popping up followed by a SHWWIIPP! shot of the tongue zipping out, fly-zapping style. But then I can be a real hack sometimes so best you stick to your own ideas I reckon ;-)
Nope, you keep 'em coming Rob. This is going along on panel by panel basis and I'm looking forward to tightening it all up in the end so any help is appreciated.
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Looks cool! Although I think the first version of the frog coming out of the water had a bolder shot because it was focused more on the action of the animals attack, while on the new picture we see a big panorama of the forest and the lake with some action in the middle I'm not sure that it gets the viewers attention as much as the first one you did. Of course it all depends on what you want to express with the picture. sorry for the crab, cool comic either way!!! Will this be published somewhere?
Miklós, I agree with you absolutely. Both versions should have been more exciting and interesting than they turned out but somehow didn't. The Long shot is a bit of an odd choice but I still think that if it got done properly, could work.
Thanks for the criticism, it's very welcome. As for publishing? They'll be enough Gungle gear by the end of the 100 Days to get some sort of album together.
Thanks!
The Gungle river stuff is gorgeous Warwick. FWIW I think I might have had an impact shot of the frog popping up followed by a SHWWIIPP! shot of the tongue zipping out, fly-zapping style. But then I can be a real hack sometimes so best you stick to your own ideas I reckon ;-)
Nope, you keep 'em coming Rob. This is going along on panel by panel basis and I'm looking forward to tightening it all up in the end so any help is appreciated.
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